2003-08-25

3:20 p.m.


Tailbone Lust

Read This Diary

CONTENT 68/70
I LOVE YOUR DIARY!!! Okay, now that I've said that, I'll go into detail a little bit. Some of your entries are painfully short, and that was the only reason I took off a little tiny bit. You're a great writer, you express yourself wonderfully, and in your intro you even said that correct spelling is a must, and you stick to that! I don't get a headache from bad grammar or spelling. Some of your entries are side-splittingly funny. I could keep reading for a very, very long time and not get bored. This made me laugh too, because if that's the case, my memory should also be quite excellent. The disclaimer is great. Before I go off ranting about how great too much else is, I'd like to mention that I like the layout that you want to get when review time is over. I like this one too, but it is dark and could conceivably be depressing after a while. My only question is this: do you ever have bad days? Or are you just excellent at making them seem inconsequential?

STYLE 10/10!
You have managed, somehow, to wow me. You have so much freaking energy! Your style kept me quite entertained, and if your writing is a real testament to who you are, you sound like a pretty awesome person. Go you!

DESIGN 8/10
::winces:: I hate taking points off because I really love your diary, but I have two small problems with it. The image only loads about half the time. I'm guessing that's not your fault, but it's driving me slightly insane. The other thing is that when I shrink the browser window as I sometimes do when I'm reviewing (1/2 screen Notepad and 1/2 screen diary), I can't see the scrolly on the bottom of the screen. Aaaaaand! You don't have two horizontal scrollies! My biggest pet peeve, and you have avoided it.

NAVIGATION 4/5
It would be nicer from a navigational standpoint if the next/previous buttons were either under your text box or at the end of the entry. Besides that, it's there, it's neat, and all the links work.

FREQUENCY 5/5
Generally, I'd take off a point or two for that many updates per day, but I enjoyed reading them so much that I decided to give you full points. FULL POINTS! I only do that when I am truly wowed.

posted by April at 3:20 p.m.
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