CONTENT 30/70
You repeat a lot of stuff, and misspell a lot, and I think that could be taken care of if you did a quick proofread before your final posting. Sometimes your stuff just doesn't seem to make sense to the uninitiated reader.
STYLE 5/10
Wow, I wouldn't call your titles clever so much as really long, and they don't have a whole hell of a lot to do with the actual entries.
DESIGN 7/10
The black background red font is a little played.
NAVIGATION 2/5
I don't like having to scroll to the right and/or down to read your entry. Design considerations are nice and all, but this IS diaryland, not designapalooza.
FREQUENCY 5/5
Daily, or more than daily...close enough.