2003-10-20

7:06 p.m.


Slow-Down

Read This Diary

CONTENT 70/70

YOU'RE IN HIGH SCHOOL?! I have not found a flaw in your writing. No giggles or misspellings, no over used punctuation.

STYLE 10/10

Your entries are full bodied, mostly straight to the heart of the matter and thought filled. You capture more feelings of the average high school student in one sentence than any one I have read before.

DESIGN 9/10

Your colors capture the emotion beautifully. To me your small gray lettering on black background shows you want to stand out and be heard but still remain �gray� about how to do that and I think this is what helps readers better capture the �relationship� you have with the gentlemen you write about. Your swirl picture works in a similar fashion. I like the holding on text but that could have some effect to stand out more. The text above and below the picture don�t seem to fit your personality quite as much.

NAVIGATION 5/5

They all work fine. They are also contained neatly in a paragraph while it still being understood that they are links.

FREQUENCY 4/5

Pretty frequent. You have had a diary before you should know better- ARCHIVE!!!

posted by April at 7:06 p.m.
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