2003-10-11

2:40 p.m.


Forever Grey

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CONTENT 40/70

You write a lot and clearly, just nothing interesting. Your grammar seems to be fine, too, except your sometime inability to write whole sentences, but I believe that might be part of your style. You seem to have a lot of problems with your friends and emotions. Finding out one or two guys are @$$�s isn�t the end of the world. It's just part of being a teen. Relax and take a step back and ask yourself how you can improve your life and see that it�s really not that bad unless you make it.

STYLE 5/10

You write from your thoughts. You are just writing everything you think and that�s fine, but whatever you talk about is personal and not for readers to understand unless they know your friends.

DESIGN 6/10

It�s a pretty neat design you have but you must have a small screen that everything has to be bunched up. That side box can be taller to fit more. I hate having to scroll that much to read it all. You might also want to move it down lengthwise on the bottom of the entry box so I can read full sentences rather than 2 words a line. The dark colors and lone tree really capture your personality that I find through your writing. Please learn to archive your older entries too.

NAVIGATION 2/5

Yes, it�s unique but annoying as hell to guess what each word is going to take me to. The notify list kind of makes the end of the entry look kind of goofy. That might be moved to the side bar you have.

FREQUENCY 5/5

You�re often enough for just starting.

posted by April at 2:40 p.m.
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