CONTENT 40/70
What? You refer to people who have no previous introduction, and it feels like you write in code. Sometimes your entries are one sentence long, and sometimes they are eleven pages; you need to find a happy medium. Blocks of unbroken text like that put the reader to sleep.
STYLE 1/10
This diary is pretty much bare-bones; there's not much room for style. You might want to add some extras that are uniquely you, or develop a style of writing that doesn't require a decoder ring to understand.
DESIGN 8/10
I don't know what that picture is at the top, and your colors don't match, but it's simple and I can read it, and that ain't nevah a problem.
NAVIGATION 5/5
All good.
FREQUENCY 5/5
Once a week, give or take.