CONTENT 45/70
Blah. I have the feeling that somewhere inside you, you have potential to be a good diarist, but as it is now, it's pretty boring. Maybe instead of listing everything you do each day, you could expand on one or two things that were particularly interesting. Volleyball camp can't possibly be as boring as you make it seem here.
STYLE 8/10
Yay! You're not goth/brooding/cutting/hyperchristian. This makes me happy. Unfortunately, that means you're getting points for what you're not rather than what you are, but that should give you incentive to develop your diary personality more.
DESIGN 9/10
Yay! A simple design, where everything is accessible and clear. Wahoo! But, since your v links are strikethrough, I insist on taking a point off.
NAVIGATION 3/5
The scrollie on your entry overlaps with your menu box, and when it goes behind the box, it can't be picked up from there again. A small point, sure, but a point. Also, if there was some way you could make your entry box shorter so your prev/next links were on the page without my having to scroll down the sides, that would be awesome.
FREQUENCY 5/5