2003-09-30

12:27 p.m.


sahara29

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CONTENT 60/70

Wow. I would have never guessed you were a high school student (15!!!??). Your entries are written very clearly and have a lot of bulk. You occasionally use words I admittedly had to look up. It�s great to read about your experiences in this crazy school you go to. It sounds really interesting. I like the interesting life you lead. I like learning about your friends and I can certainly empathize with you on your relationship with your mother.

STYLE 8/10

I really like that I can picture what it is that�s going on sometimes. There are times you are right on with the amount of detail you put into the situation and then there are other times I wish I could know more about you so I might figure out what you mean. Occasionally it just seems bland. AHAHA Porn and clementines- Bravo for your typing abilities ;)

DESIGN 5/10

Ok here�s where I have the most difficulty in looking at your diary. I did read that you had fixed it up and I do love the warm colors and I understand the connection between the red and redhead but when I see red I think passionate (with feeling not hormones necessarily) and anger. These emotions seem to be really opposite of what I can draw from your writing about your personality. I feel like you are a calm person who takes the time to listen and learn. More yellows or light oranges might help me feel a sunny side. Blue or green accents might help bring more color and brighten the reds and orange contrasts. I also have a problem with the words not fitting into the bars you have for navigation. That really irritates me and I know it shouldn�t be hard to fix. Your titles are great but they are not found anywhere on the entry. I would either stash them at the bottom with the written at or a thin blue font on the orange check bar on top.

NAVIGATION 4/5

Well I guess my big problem is listed above. I also have a little problem with the way it is just a list. I would like a little separation between entry accesses, contacts and other things.

FREQUENCY 4/5

With the exception of your break due to your computer restriction I�d say at least every other day almost!

posted by April at 12:27 p.m.
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