2003-08-11

Girls Don't Cry


Girls Don't Cry

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CONTENT 61/70

Wa-hoo! Your spelling is quite wonderful and you capitalize things that need to be capitalized! That's great. Each entry has some bits of quirk in them, and I enjoy reading them. Bravo for that! Though some of the sentences I've read are missing key words, key words that make the sentences flow. But those are petty mistakes. Good going, GDC!

STYLE 7/10

Each title of your entries have such character. You should incorporate that creativity into your other places in your diary.

DESIGN 6/10

Its bland, but it works for you diary.

NAVIGATION 5/5

No problems here!

FREQUENCY 5/5

If not everday, every two days!

posted by April at Girls Don't Cry
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